You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: – Explain why you are unhappy – Request a refund – Make arrangements to return the damaged item

Dear Sir/Madam I ordered a
dress
last
week from your establishment listed at Amazon.
in
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. The
dress
arrived today and
hence
I am writing to bring to your notice
about
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the fabric quality which stole away the essence of the piece. The description on the listing reads and I quote, “The fabric is 100% pure cotton”,
however
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that is
not the case as I am a textile student and I know fabrics pretty well. As per my
experience
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it is only 20% Cotton. The finishing of the same isn’t neat either with threads flowing out of the
dress
. I have requested
the
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refund
to
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online
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portal
however
they have refused
for
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the same and are offering
exchange
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service in return.
Further
speaking to their customer service team they suggested
to reach
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out to you directly. The piece is
highly priced
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and it hasn’t met any of the
description
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given or my expectations. I would request you to refund the amount as I was saving that sum for a long time and I’d rather buy from
physical
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store than being forced to exchange it with something I am not keen on. The
dress
has been repacked in the original packing and I will ship it to
south
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Delhi pick up point tomorrow, for it to reach your warehouse safely.
Also
please find attached images of the
dress
along with the billing information for your perusal. Looking forward to
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back. Yours Faithfully Ashima
Submitted by supriya.d2017 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my disappointment
  • I regret to inform you that
  • I am dissatisfied with the item I received
  • The item arrived damaged
  • The product is in unsatisfactory condition
  • I expected better quality
  • I would like to request a refund
  • I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
  • I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
  • I suggest arranging a pick-up service
  • I expect a prompt response and resolution
  • I hope for a satisfactory outcome
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