The pia charts bellow show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The two very slight increase of about only 1% to 30.9% in 2005 in France. And
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production in France in 1995 and in 2005.
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in France.
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energy
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energy
which decreased in production from 28,27% to 19, 55%, perspective in 1995 and in 2005.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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