The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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in four different nations in the year

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1950,

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and 2002

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and the prediction

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2050.

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, it can be clearly seen from the graph that, among

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countries, China has the highest proportion of

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in the period of 100 years. Meanwhile, the

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for Japan is the lowest so far. In 1950, the percentage of

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in China was larger than

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others countries which was nearly a quarter, following

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for Indians with 15%. The

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of the USA accounted for more than 5% that slightly higher than Japan with approximately 5%. After 48 years, China’s

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remained the highest

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20% of the total

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it observed a

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decrease to 20%. The proportion of Americans and

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followed that trend and declined to 5% and 3% respectively.

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, the data

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in India rose to nearly a fifth in 2002.

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, India is projected to witness a significant increase to just about 20% in the

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the became the country having the largest percentage of the total world

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. In the same year, the

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for the residents in China and Japan

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predicted to go down by 5% and 2% respectively.

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, the

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of the USA is likely to remain unchanged at 5% in 2050.