The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the total
population
in four different nations in the year
of
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1950,
2002
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and 2002
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and the prediction
in
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2050.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the graph that, among
four
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countries, China has the highest proportion of
population
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the population
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in the period of 100 years. Meanwhile, the
figure
for Japan is the lowest so far. In 1950, the percentage of
population
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the population
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in China was larger than
any
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others countries which was nearly a quarter, following
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the
figure
for Indians with 15%. The
population
of the USA accounted for more than 5% that slightly higher than Japan with approximately 5%. After 48 years, China’s
figure
remained the highest
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exact
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20% of the total
population
while
it observed a
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decrease to 20%. The proportion of Americans and
Japaneses
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Japanese
had
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followed that trend and declined to 5% and 3% respectively.
In contrast
, the data
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population
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in India rose to nearly a fifth in 2002.
On the other hand
, India is projected to witness a significant increase to just about 20% in the
population
the became the country having the largest percentage of the total world
population
. In the same year, the
figure
for the residents in China and Japan
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predicted to go down by 5% and 2% respectively.
However
, the
population
of the USA is likely to remain unchanged at 5% in 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected population growth
  • line graph
  • milestones
  • projections
  • plateau
  • decline
  • rate of growth
  • peak
  • surpass
  • crossover
  • period
  • trend analysis
  • comparative analysis
  • significantly
  • eventually
  • illustrates
  • specific period
  • trends
  • summarizes
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