The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the total
population
in four different nations in the year of
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2002
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and 2002
in
2050.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the graph that, among four
countries, China has the highest proportion of Correct article usage
the four
population
in the period of 100 years. Meanwhile, the Add an article
the population
figure
for Japan is the lowest so far.
In 1950, the percentage of population
in China was larger than Add an article
the population
any
others countries which was nearly a quarter, following Correct pronoun usage
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that is
the figure
for Indians with 15%. The population
of the USA accounted for more than 5% that slightly higher than Japan with approximately 5%. After 48 years, China’s figure
remained the highest as
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population
while
it observed a dramatical
decrease to 20%. The proportion of Americans and Replace the word
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Japanese
had
followed that trend and declined to 5% and 3% respectively. Unnecessary verb
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In contrast
, the data of
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on
population
in India rose to nearly a fifth in 2002.
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the population
On the other hand
, India is projected to witness a significant increase to just about 20% in the population
the became the country having the largest percentage of the total world population
. In the same year, the figure
for the residents in China and Japan are
predicted to go down by 5% and 2% respectively. Change the verb form
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However
, the population
of the USA is likely to remain unchanged at 5% in 2050.Submitted by dotranmtrang on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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