The chart shows the percentage of males and females teachers in six types of educational settings in The UK in 2010.

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The pie chart represents the difference in the percentage of men and women teachers working in multifarious educational institutions in the UK in the same year. Women have dominated the first two stages of education,

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between the two genders reached its utmost in the nursery stage, constituting 94% and did the primary school with a close percentage of 82%.

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The chart shows the percentage of males and females teachers in six types of educational settings in The UK in 2010.

In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applications may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money.  Discuss both views and give your own opinion.