The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts are illustrating the amount of eight different

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of industrial sectors, which were contributed

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Turkey’s economy in 2000 and 2016.

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, it can be seen that

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2000 the greatest sector

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belonged to Agricultural activities;

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, Healthcare and Education remained the same from 2000 to 2016 and

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accounted for the highest proportion of economic contribution in 2016. On the one hand, in the 16-year period, Agriculture, Leisure and hospitality and Government experienced a decrease of 10%, 3% and 3%, respectively.

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, all the other sectors witnessed an increase from 2000 to 2016. Construction saw the most considerable rise, from 3% in 2000 to 10% in 2016.

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, Trade, utilities and transportation

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developed by 2%.

nicky nabaviThu Jul 02 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

126 words

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The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people say that parents should spend time on reading or telling stories to children, while others think parents no longer have to do this because there are other sources for stories such as books, TV, and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days’ people have too many choices for clothing. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

please describe the process of brick manufacturing?