You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine. For someone to live with a family for 6 months and look after their 6 years old child. Write a letter to the parents. explain why you would like the job give details of why you should be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Dear sir or Madam,

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Dear sir or madam, Hope my letter finds you in good health. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Miriam Medawar and I am an AUB graduate holding a degree in child education. I am writing

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in response to the publicity I saw in an Australian magazine. Please allow me to explain and elaborate on my request. As a start, let me shed the light on the fact that I am a person who loves children, and

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was the main reason why I have chosen my major.

Moreover

, I have worked for the past five years in Learn and Play nursery with kids

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between four and eight years old. I believe I am the person you are requesting,

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can be seen with my bachelor and experience. I am sure I will be able to

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all the tasks needed regarding taking care of your six years old child.

On the other hand

, I used to live with my grandmother who passed away a month ago and

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I find myself lonely looking for a place to be my home.

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to all the above, I have heard a lot about Australia and would love to spend my free time discovering it, visiting its monuments and historical places to get to know the country more.

Finally

, I am humbly requesting to meet you for an interview at your convenience. Please do not hesitate to contact me at 009613687175. Looking forward to hearing good news from your end. Gratefully yours, Miriam Helou

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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10 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cites closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Some young people are leaving the country side to lives in cities and towns,leaving only old people in the country side. What problems are caused by this issue. What can be done to solve this issue

Some people think that competitive sports have positive effects on teenager education, while others argue that effect is negative. Discuss both view and give your opinion.