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Sales companies should recruit people who are hungry for money as they will make the most dedicated workers.
Do you think money is the driving force behind hard work? What factors should be taken into consideration when recruiting staff for sales positions?

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Mostly
Suggestion
Most
 people
work
 hard, struggle from hand to mouth to graduate with high score so they can find
good
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a good job
good jobs
job
 with high earning and vast allowance packages so they can provide every comfort and luxury
to
Suggestion
for
 their family. Along with working in
largest
Suggestion
larger
, high grossing and best performing company to get good experience, earning
high
Suggestion
a high salary
salary
 is
also
 very important for
job
 satisfaction. An employee
always desire
Suggestion
always desires
 to
work
 in a profit –making and richest company where he can
work
 with friendly, encouraging and supportive staff, a good working experience and high wage with health insurance, travel allowance, paid sick leave, holidays and vacations.
Furthermore
, if you will earn
good
Suggestion
a good salary
salary
then
 there will no need to do part-time
job
 to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their family expenses and can spend extravagant and happy time 70with them after busy office schedule. A research was done in American joint committee in 2015, 40 people
work
 in their desire department with less
salary
 while 40 people choose their desire
salary
 with
tough working environment
Suggestion
the tough working environment
. After 1 year, people working in their selective department need to do part-time or extra
job
 to complete their family requirement were more stressful and exhausted while people choose high wage get
promotion
Suggestion
a promotion
 by their full focus and hard
work
 on one
job
. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that money should be basic and primary concern of every employee while he get one or more
job
 opportunities. Because every need of life related to buying new mobile, car, house, providing better education to the children, or planning
foreign visit
Suggestion
a foreign visit
 can only get by money.
Submitted by Sila Muntaha on

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