The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts
illustrates
the proportion of British Change the verb form
illustrate
students
who speak other languages Use synonyms
besides
English at one university in Linking Words
year
2000 and 2010. We could figure Change the article
the year
some
apparent differences easily.
First of all, only 10 Change preposition
out some
Use synonyms
percent
of the Change the spelling
per cent
students
could not speak another Use synonyms
language
despite Use synonyms
of
English in 2010, the number is half of the data in 2000, which means more and more people are bilingual in at least one foreign Change preposition
apply
language
, Use synonyms
Linking Words
that
is the biggest change in Correct pronoun usage
which
this
decade. There are Linking Words
also
some slight increase and decrease, Linking Words
for example
, Linking Words
students
who choose French as a Use synonyms
second
Linking Words
language
dropped Use synonyms
for
5 Change preposition
by
Use synonyms
percent
from 15 to 10 Change the spelling
per cent
while
the proportion Linking Words
Spanish
speaker went up from 30 Change preposition
of Spanish
Use synonyms
percent
to 35 Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
percent
, there is no doubt that Spanish is still the most popular choice.
Change the spelling
per cent
In addition
, the percentage of Linking Words
students
who speak some small Use synonyms
language
and who master two foreign languages both experienced an increase of 5 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
Linking Words
that
is a good signal. And it is worth noting that, the group who speak German is the only one in these groups whose data remain the same.
Correct pronoun usage
which
To sum up
, we can draw the conclusion that British Linking Words
students
had been more willing to learn other sorts of languages than before.Use synonyms
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