The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit?

Cash
and
Credit
card
has
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ame demand
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.
Cash
is used to buy things that
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the
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human needs. We
also
have
cash
in a
credit
card
. In my view, both are the best ways. All of us may not have
credit
cards. As we know that India is a developing country, some below
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poverty
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no idea what is
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a
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redit
card
. So they use
cash
to buy.
Credit
cards are used basically to pay enormous amounts.
For instance
, if we want to buy basic groceries, we will have to pay
cash
instead
of using
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redit
card
. If we visit a vegetable vendor, he may not be able to provide us
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redit
card
system. In
such
a situation we definitely need to pay it by
cash
. But if we are using the online transactions, we may use our
credit
cards. If in a situation now, we see that our bank accounts are being hacked which is why it is not that safe to use
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redit
card
.
However
, if we pay
cash
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paper money.
Also
, the poor cannot be able to access the
credit
card
system. But if we consider a situation where students want to access online classes or coaching, their payment would be through online. There is no chance here to pay it by
cash
. So
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conclude that
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both the ways are useful for better payment. It is always said that carrying
cash
is difficult and unsafe rather than holding a
card
sometimes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • security benefits
  • fraud and theft protection
  • credit score
  • financial products
  • rewards programs
  • cashback
  • budgeting
  • tracking expenses
  • overspend
  • debt accumulation
  • interest payments
  • universal acceptance
  • privacy
  • financial benefits
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