Employers should give long holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree or disagree.

Employee is the blood of every organisation. In
this
modern
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most
of
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the
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people
has
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stress
especially
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worker
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workers
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.
However
, a fair amount of people think that employers should provide long vacation leave to
workforce
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the workforce
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in order to motivate the
labour
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to do their work
effeciently
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efficiently
. I strongly agree with
this
statement because
authority
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the authority
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person must give long day
holidays
for
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to
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their
low level
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low-level
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people.
One
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the
one
hand,
employer
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the employer
an employer
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should support
to
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their staff because they are
done
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doing
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job
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jobs
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such
as
production
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the production
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department.
Moreover
, if
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a top
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top level
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person wants to get more
production
they will
allow
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be allowed
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to take more
holidays
because without stress and
depression
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depression,
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man
can do anything
otherwise
is not possible.
In addition
, a
company
should arrange
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free vacation for their member of
workforce
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the workforce
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in
oder
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order
to feel
relax
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relaxed
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and undoubtedly
production
and profit will increase when after
holidays
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the holidays
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.
For instance
,
one
of my
friend
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friends
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working
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works
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in a corporate
company
which is
IT
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the IT
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field. her
company
is
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has
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arranged 10
days
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days'
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holiday for all
worker
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workers
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in
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at
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every
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end of the year which
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and most importantly without cost.
One
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the other hand, without
happy
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happiness
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nothing
fullfill
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fulfil
.
This
means when staff feel happy to do work automatically
production
ratio dramatically
increasing
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.
Furthermore
, job satisfaction is most important
compare
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compared
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than
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others. Officers should treat
to
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personnel like
a
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human
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humans
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not
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, not
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a
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apply
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machine
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machines
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.
This
means they must give long leave in order to
blue-coller
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blue-collar
worker
have
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has
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a chance to spend time with family.
Therefore
,
depression
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amount will decline drastically.
For example
,
The
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Australia
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company
is given
long
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a long
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holiday for
hired
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a hired
the hired
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man
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men
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when
christmas
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Christmas
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to new year approximately
minimum
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a minimum
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2
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of 2
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weeks
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weeks'
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holidays
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holiday
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gets
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for gets
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the Austalian
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Austalian
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Australian
public.
To conclude
, every organisation
must need
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for
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labourer
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labourers
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to finish
task
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tasks
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. Irrefutably machines
are being working
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are being worked
are working
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more
efficient
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efficiently
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compare
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compared
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than
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to
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human
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humans
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but
man
must need to operate the machines. So employers can provide long
holidays
how they will arrange to the temporary
worker
when
permanant
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permanent
staff is taken leave
mean
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meanwhile
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while
will use the
sesonal
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seasonal
hired
man
. Is it possible to do
?
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The answer is undoubtedly it is possible and many companies are being
done
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this
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