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The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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 graph that shows previous conviction by ages and sexes in the UK while
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 illustrate inmate gender in the UK.
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, if we look at the
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 graph we can see that means gender is always higher than women.
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 chart shows that
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 percentage is male and a little bit female. In the line
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 we can see that male starts from 2
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 while female 0 during the start they dramatically increase in 20 with percentage 16 men and 5 women, but
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 they slightly decrease in 45 years to 8 and 1 percentage .
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 chart shows male and female
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prison inmates and the 96
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 men while female 4.
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