You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Manager, I had recently visited your restaurant Mini Thailand in Bandra, along with my family. We were celebrating my father's 50th birthday and decided to gather at Mini Thailand as he loves

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cuisine very much. I am writing

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letter to you for sharing my feedback, based on the

dissapointing

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disappointing

experience we had. The visit to your restaurant totally spoiled our celebration mood for multiple reasons. Your staff looked extremely busy to not even serve us water, even after multiple reminders.

Secondly

, after 75 minutes when we were

finally

served our order, we were disgusted by the horrible smell that was coming from the stale

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curry! Lack of hospitality was still excused by us but can anyone excuse being served stale food? As the restaurant manager, you must

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train all your chefs and maintain

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quality of everything being served.

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, you should educate all your waiters to have a warm and welcoming attitude towards all patrons.

Additionally

, I request an apology letter from you as our family had a total show-down that evening. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully Radhika

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

187 words

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