The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#diagrams #show #stages #equipment #process #cement #purposes #summarise #information #features #comparisons
Those pictures illustrate how
cement
is produced, and how concrete is made. Use synonyms
Overall
, the process of making Linking Words
cement
uses some tools, as the production of concrete requires only a mixer. Use synonyms
Also
the production of Linking Words
cement
consists of several stages.
Use synonyms
The first step is
that limestone and clay are crushed into pieces of powder. After that, the powder is mixed using a mixer before passing into a rotating heater. In the rotating heater a material is heated. After using a grinder, get Linking Words
cement
which is bagged into bags.
Use synonyms
According to
the Linking Words
second
picture, in order to make concrete, water is used at 10%, Linking Words
cement
at 15%, sand at 25% and gravel 50% which are combined into a concrete mixer.
The pie charts below show the average Use synonyms
household
expenditures (costs) in Use synonyms
Japan
and Use synonyms
Malaysia
in the year 2010.
The diagrams demonstrate the mean Use synonyms
household
spending in Use synonyms
Japan
and Use synonyms
Malaysia
in 2010. The components of these expenditures include: housing, Use synonyms
transport
, Use synonyms
food
, Use synonyms
health
Use synonyms
care
and other Use synonyms
goods
and Use synonyms
services
.
The diagrams demonstrate the mean Use synonyms
household
spending on housing, Use synonyms
transport
, Use synonyms
food
, Use synonyms
health
Use synonyms
care
and other Use synonyms
goods
and Use synonyms
services
in Use synonyms
Japan
and Use synonyms
Malaysia
in 2010.
In the first diagram, Use synonyms
goods
and Use synonyms
services
accounted for the highest in the Use synonyms
household
budget in Use synonyms
Japan
, at 29%. Use synonyms
This
was followed by Linking Words
food
, housing and Use synonyms
transport
with: 24%, 21% and 20% respectively Use synonyms
while
the least expenditure was on Linking Words
health
Use synonyms
care
at 6%.
Use synonyms
However
, housing was seen to top the budget spendings of households in Linking Words
Malaysia
at 34%. Use synonyms
This
was followed by Linking Words
food
, other Use synonyms
goods
and Use synonyms
services
and Use synonyms
transport
with: 27%, 26% and 10 % respectively. Households in Use synonyms
Malaysia
expended their least budget spendings on Use synonyms
health
Use synonyms
care
.
Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
Japan
spent twice of Use synonyms
Malaysia
’s expenditures on both Use synonyms
transport
and Use synonyms
health
Use synonyms
care
.Use synonyms
Submitted by Assad on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Basic structure: Change the ninth paragraph.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement, household, japan, malaysia, transport, food, health, care, goods, services with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the ninth paragraph.
▼