The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Those pictures illustrate how
cement
is produced, and how concrete is made. Overall
, the process of making cement
uses some tools, as the production of concrete requires only a mixer. Also
the production of cement
consists of several stages.
The first step is
that limestone and clay are crushed into pieces of powder. After that, the powder is mixed using a mixer before passing into a rotating heater. In the rotating heater a material is heated. After using a grinder, get cement
which is bagged into bags.
According to
the second
picture, in order to make concrete, water is used at 10%, cement
at 15%, sand at 25% and gravel 50% which are combined into a concrete mixer.
The pie charts below show the average household
expenditures (costs) in Japan
and Malaysia
in the year 2010.
The diagrams demonstrate the mean household
spending in Japan
and Malaysia
in 2010. The components of these expenditures include: housing, transport
, food
, health
care
and other goods
and services
.
The diagrams demonstrate the mean household
spending on housing, transport
, food
, health
care
and other goods
and services
in Japan
and Malaysia
in 2010.
In the first diagram, goods
and services
accounted for the highest in the household
budget in Japan
, at 29%. This
was followed by food
, housing and transport
with: 24%, 21% and 20% respectively while
the least expenditure was on health
care
at 6%.
However
, housing was seen to top the budget spendings of households in Malaysia
at 34%. This
was followed by food
, other goods
and services
and transport
with: 27%, 26% and 10 % respectively. Households in Malaysia
expended their least budget spendings on health
care
.
Finally
, Japan
spent twice of Malaysia
’s expenditures on both transport
and health
care
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