You have lost something on a bus and called customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: describe the item you lost explain why you weren't happy with the customer service say what action you would like the company to take.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

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has reference to the complaint id is WER456. I am writing

this

letter to show my dissatisfaction

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the horrible customer service of your organization. My name is Shreya,

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any

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my contact number is 54321789. Let me explain in detail. Recently ,I boarded a

bus

operated by your organization

that is

running in the Bangalore-Goa route. The date of my travel is 4th September. I lost my finger ring on the

bus

that has a green stone attached

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it. It is

gold

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ring.

However

, I reached out to the client service department on the morning of 5th September

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and informed them about

this

incident. A girl named Tania

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received my call ,took all the details, and assured me that she will call me back with a resolution. Unfortunately, that never happened.

Thus

, I reach out

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department once again. Now, another representative attended my query, and to my

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surprise

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he informed me that he is unable to find any

such

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Therefore

, I repeated the entire story again and post that

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got the reference number that

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mentioned above.

Although

the

second

person committed me that I will get information, I am yet to get any

further

communication from anyone. I would request you to please reach out to the customer service department ,or else to discuss

this

issue with the

attendent

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attendant

on the

bus

Furthermore

, I am sure that the

bus

conductor will have some idea about my ring. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Shreya

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

256 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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