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Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gym and other sport clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate and reach a conclusion.

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Taking beautiful pictures of
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nature is one of my
favorite
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 things to do. Sunrise, sunset and moon pictures are very enthusiastic for me. I
also
 have tried many hobbies before,
as a result
, I really liked reading
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a book
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book
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! Seven years ago, I attended
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my school library in the middle of the summer. There were many books,
however
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 one
book
 caught my interest. It was “Little women” by Louisa May Alcott. Folders were ruined, pages were coffee stained. The reason for
this
 stain is, kids
at
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my age
doesn’t
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 really have
interest
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 in reading books. They only have
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 in playing games and spending most of their time outside. After all, they
spilled
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teacher’s
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 coffee on the library books
accidently
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accidentally
,
nevertheless
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 I didn’t complain. Beautiful drawings were on it, just like the 19th century. I liked the part where coffee stains were painted the whole drawings. It was very interesting from the beginning to the end. After I read
this
book
, reading became my hobby. They taught me
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 myself and spending my time productively. As an international student, I will have a chance to exchange my
favorite
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book
 name, content and opinion with American school teenagers. I can tell a lot about my country
fairytale
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 and legends.
That is
 why I will always have a story to tell to my host family and friends. I am looking forward to meeting new people, experiencing adventures and visiting wonderful places.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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