Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

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in my hometown Maringá, I was seven years old. That
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I met two amazing persons, my teacher Márcia and my friend Tatiane.
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school, and introduce me to the new space. My friend Tatiane knew many funny people who became good friends later. About my teacher Márcia she was very kind, and give me
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confidence and big opportunities for my studies.
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met special people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gender diversity
  • Affirmative action
  • Meritocracy
  • Quotas
  • Glass ceiling
  • Legal enforcement
  • Tokenism
  • Voluntary measures
  • Career progression
  • Representation
  • Workforce parity
  • Backlash
  • Historical imbalances
  • Corporate governance
  • Inclusive practices
  • Boardroom dynamics
  • Gender norms
  • Unconscious bias
  • Regulatory frameworks
  • Corporate ladder
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