you and some friends ate a mean at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter give details of your visit to restaurant explain the reason for celebration say what was good about the food and service

Dear Sir, I am
Pleased
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to inform you that
last
night
me
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I
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and my friend had a
birthday
party in your
restaurant
. We want to thank
to
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your staff for
Services
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your Services
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and enjoyed
food
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the food
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which was very delicious.
Last
night we had a
birthday
party in your
restaurant
, it was our
first
visit to your
restaurant
. As I never had an experience with the
restaurant
before, so we were very conscious about the
food
and services. The
birthday
celebration was for my 1-year-old kid that’s the reason we were very excited to celebrate his
first
birthday
, on
this
occasion we invited our friends and family members to your
restaurant
to have a meal and have a
get together
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. We found your
food
was very delicious, especially spaghettis,
chowmin
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chow mien
and Chines Rice were fabulous, we ate Pizza and took some salad from the bar. Your staff were neat, clean and very active to serve the things on
table
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the table
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, we noticed the refilling of
buffet
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was time to time before getting empty. Hereby I want to inform you that we were pleased with the
food
and services at your
restaurant
. Thanks & Regards ABC
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