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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I forgot to take my
bag
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 when I got off the plane. I would like to seek your help to retrieve it. My name is Sarah, and I was on the flight that took off from Boston to London
last
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 Saturday. As I had a business meeting an hour after the landing, I rushed to get off the plane, without realizing that my
bag
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 was left in the overhead cabin. I found out about it during my check-in at the hotel. My fabric handbag is in orange colour and has l a long strap attached to it. There is a side pocket with
zipper
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a zipper
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 on one side of it. It is probably about 5kgs in weight. There are clothes and a pair of white sneakers in it. Would you help to check if there is
such
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bag
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a bag
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 at the lost and found counter at the airport ,please? If there is, I would appreciate it if you could contact me at +65 98875566. I will come down to collect my
bag
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. Yours faithfully, Sarah
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Airliner, oversight, misplaced, personal belongings, valuable items, sentimental significance, luggage retrieval, lost and found, passenger service, tracking, compensate, verification of ownership, promptly, inconvenience, coordinate, verify, transparent communication
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