Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree? What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
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In
this
competitive world, everyone is doing hard work
to earn a handsome amount of money.A section of society
asserts that people who are doing work
for the upliftment of society
are not getting sufficient monetary reward despite entertainers are getting more. I endorse this
ideology to a large extent , and the factors to determine the pay scale are discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, a prosperity of a nation depends upon how easily its health and education service is available to the countrymen. People who are serving humanity especially doctors and teachers/ masters do not get entitlement as per their responsibilities which not only affect their productivity but also
discourage their morale to do anything in the favour of the nation. An article published in The Tribune reported that twenty per cent of teachers either leave their jobs or choose other professions due to not getting enough money.Apart from this
, film actors who are just working for entertainment are earning billions and also
enjoying fame and privilege.Despite, they are not contributing to the advancement of a nation which results in...
However
, there are multifarious factors that should consider while calculating the wage rate. The criticality of work
is the prime reason behind it. Like doctors are the real warrior even in the toughest period of a pandemic , they are providing 24/7 services without any boundation of time. For example
, during the global pandemic novel Corona satiation only nurses, doctors and teachers help us to move swiftly instead
of those movie stars. Therefore
, people should be recognized and paid for their work
.
To conclude, it is not justified to pay low rewards to the true contributors of society
and there must be a regulatory system in which payment must be decided as per the criticality of the job and its contribution towards society
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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