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Band 8

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Sharath Ravirakula, a long-running customer at your bank. I am using your platinum member credit
card
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 and I received
last
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 month's statement. I was incredulous after looking bill, as it was very high. I reported the loss of my
card
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 the previous month as soon as I realized I lost, but it looks like the
card
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 was not frozen immediately. Out of the many items listed in the statement, I only purchased 2. There are items
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 as a Fossil Watch, New iPhone pouch, Air pods pro with a wireless charging case, and a dozen USB-C type chargers are things I did not buy.
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, my credit
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 was
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 charged in a restaurant for what seemed like a sumptuous dinner. I would like to make a formal complaint to find the person or persons responsible for
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 act and return my money. I am attaching the receipts for all the purchases for
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 month along with the receipt of the complaint I filed requesting to freeze my platinum
card
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. Thank you and best regards, Yours sincerely, Sharath.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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