Dear Sir. John Sullivan, I am writing this letter because I have seen a Spanish instructor job offer this week, in the Teaching S.A. magazine, for the Language Institute and I would like to apply for it. Currently, I am a Spanish teacher at the University of Toronto, graduated from this same respectful and awarded institution and I have been looking forward to make a move in my career in order to have a work-life balance at my routine, since I have been snowed under job with all the international students at the University at my charge and I have heard just the bests compliments coming from people that have already worked at your school. I am a qualified professional, with over a decade of experience teaching Spanish to people all over the world and coming from different cultures, which demands me dealing with all diversities. In spite of it, I have already teached pupils from all different ages, from the youngers to the oldest. You can also have certain wonderful references from me contacting the most nominated spanish languages institutes, as the CCAA and the Caballeros de Santiago, because I had also worked for them from 2008-2013 and 2015-2018, respectively. I will be enclousering my resumee at this letter so that you can have a full background from my expertises. Therefore, you can contact me through my mobile phone that is 803 946 7823 any day of the week, or sending my an email to "[email protected]" but I usually just check my mail boxing at the week days. I look forward to full all the expectations that you search for this job and hope we can meet each other soon. Yours faithfully, Anna

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Dear Sir. John Sullivan, I am writing

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letter because I have seen a

Spanish

instructor job offer

this

week, in the Teaching S.A. magazine, for the Language Institute and I would like to apply for it. Currently, I am a

Spanish

teacher at the University of Toronto, graduated from

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same respectful and awarded institution and I have been looking forward to

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a move in my career in order to have a work-life balance at my routine

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since I have been snowed under job with all the international students at the University at my charge and I have heard just the bests compliments coming from people that have already worked at your school. I am a qualified professional, with over a decade of experience teaching

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to people all over the world and coming from different cultures, which demands me

dealing

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with all diversities. In spite of it, I have already

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have certain wonderful references from me contacting the most nominated

spanish

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languages institutes, as the CCAA and the Caballeros de Santiago, because I had

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worked for them from 2008-2013 and 2015-2018, respectively. I will be

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letter so that you can have a full background from my

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803 946 7823 any day of the week, or

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. I look forward to full all the expectations that you search for

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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284 words

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