Dear Sir. John Sullivan, I am writing this letter because I have seen a Spanish instructor job offer this week, in the Teaching S.A. magazine, for the Language Institute and I would like to apply for it. Currently, I am a Spanish teacher at the University of Toronto, graduated from this same respectful and awarded institution and I have been looking forward to make a move in my career in order to have a work-life balance at my routine, since I have been snowed under job with all the international students at the University at my charge and I have heard just the bests compliments coming from people that have already worked at your school. I am a qualified professional, with over a decade of experience teaching Spanish to people all over the world and coming from different cultures, which demands me dealing with all diversities. In spite of it, I have already teached pupils from all different ages, from the youngers to the oldest. You can also have certain wonderful references from me contacting the most nominated spanish languages institutes, as the CCAA and the Caballeros de Santiago, because I had also worked for them from 2008-2013 and 2015-2018, respectively. I will be enclousering my resumee at this letter so that you can have a full background from my expertises. Therefore, you can contact me through my mobile phone that is 803 946 7823 any day of the week, or sending my an email to "[email protected]" but I usually just check my mail boxing at the week days. I look forward to full all the expectations that you search for this job and hope we can meet each other soon. Yours faithfully, Anna

Dear Sir. John Sullivan, I am writing
this
letter because I have seen a
Spanish
instructor job offer
this
week, in the Teaching S.A. magazine, for the Language Institute and I would like to apply for it. Currently, I am a
Spanish
teacher at the University of Toronto, graduated from
this
same respectful and awarded institution and I have been looking forward to
make
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a move in my career in order to have a work-life balance at my routine
,
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since I have been snowed under job with all the international students at the University at my charge and I have heard just the bests compliments coming from people that have already worked at your school. I am a qualified professional, with over a decade of experience teaching
Spanish
to people all over the world and coming from different cultures, which demands me
dealing
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with all diversities. In spite of it, I have already
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pupils
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all different ages, from the
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to the oldest. You can
also
have certain wonderful references from me contacting the most nominated
spanish
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languages institutes, as the CCAA and the Caballeros de Santiago, because I had
also
worked for them from 2008-2013 and 2015-2018, respectively. I will be
enclousering
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at
this
letter so that you can have a full background from my
expertises
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.
Therefore
, you can contact me through my mobile phone
that is
803 946 7823 any day of the week, or
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an email to "[email protected]" but I usually just check my mail boxing at
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week days
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. I look forward to full all the expectations that you search for
this
job and hope we can meet each other soon. Yours faithfully, Anna
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