You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear,... You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Jerry, I am writing you to let you know that I was sorely displeased with the meal and services that were offered to our group
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when we met at your restaurant on Monday evening.
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of all, we found out that the beef, that was part of the menu we ordered, was not properly done. None of us could eat it and we left it untouched. It was a total waste of our money and quite annoying. As if that wasn't enough, we waited for more than twenty minutes at the counter just to express our displeasure, and to my amazement, there was nobody to complain to. It seems as if all your staff took a break at the same time. For the now, we have decided, as an organisation, to stop meeting at your restaurant. We need to be sure that you will take corrective actions concerning our complaints. We want you to ensure that your staffs are more customer-friendly, and to ensure that you hire an experienced cook to supervise all meals cooked before serving them to Customers.
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, I do hope you will do as we have communicated to you in good time. Thank you for your time and have a nice day. Yours sincerely, Rotimi
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