You bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. There is a problem with the item you purchased. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter explain the details of your purchase describe the problem that you have with it suggest what can be done about it

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is
sara
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Sara
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Ahmadi and I am One of your
costumers
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customers
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who bought a
table
from your store two weeks ago on July 2th. Actually, if you remember, I am living in Isfahan ,and I ordered a dark brown
table
which is suitable for our dining room and it
also
has four chairs with green fabrics.
Unfortunatelly
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Unfortunately
, my order has a problem , it has several scratches on its
table
and they annoy me a lot.
Therefore
, I want to ask you to change the
table
for me or at least send someone to fix
this
problem .
Also
, you can ask
from
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one of your agencies that are working in our town to come and paint
this
table
again . I am looking forward to receiving an answer from your company and I hope you solve
this
problem for me as soon as
possiable
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possible
. Yours Faithfully, Sara Ahmadi
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • impeccable
  • blemish
  • defective
  • warranty
  • craftsmanship
  • discrepancy
  • assembly
  • rectify
  • address the issue
  • customer satisfaction
  • return policy
  • imperfection
  • sturdy
  • refund
  • replacement
  • workmanship
  • durability
  • manufacturing defect
  • courier
  • logistics
  • rebate
  • customer service
  • resolve
  • after-sales support
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