You bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. There is a problem with the item you purchased. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter explain the details of your purchase describe the problem that you have with it suggest what can be done about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is
sara
Ahmadi and I am One of your Change the capitalization
Sara
costumers
who bought a Correct your spelling
customers
table
from your store two weeks ago on July 2th. Actually, if you remember, I am living in Isfahan ,and I ordered a dark brown table
which is suitable for our dining room and it also
has four chairs with green fabrics.
Unfortunatelly
, my order has a problem , it has several scratches on its Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
table
and they annoy me a lot.
Therefore
, I want to ask you to change the table
for me or at least send someone to fix this
problem . Also
, you can ask from
one of your agencies that are working in our town to come and paint Change preposition
apply
this
table
again .
I am looking forward to receiving an answer from your company and I hope you solve this
problem for me as soon as possiable
.
Yours Faithfully,
Sara AhmadiCorrect your spelling
possible
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