You bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. There is a problem with the item you bought. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear John, I am writing

this

letter to deeply apologize for any inconvenient

noise

that you might have heard from my

house

last

Saturday. Let me start by explaining the reasons behind

such

noise

, which was due to unexpected water infiltration in my basement. Because of that, I was forced to urgently remove all the concrete from the floor in order to find and stop the source of water. Once again, I would really like you to forgive me for any disturbance that the

noise

may have caused to you and your family, especially for your newborn.

However

, as I said, it was really necessary to have people over my

house

as soon as possible to avoid more problems in the structure of the

house

. As to the continuing of the fixing in my

house

, I have scheduled it to occur during working yours only, as well as, have installed soundproof walls in the basement aiming to reduce the

noise

heard outside the

house

. Thank you for your understanding.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

6.50

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

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Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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