Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree? What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid

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actors

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or

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bosses

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attract greater salaries than other workers like nurses, doctors and

teachers

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, who do not seem to be prized as much. The income of the latter,

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, should I feel be much higher to reflect their value to

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Teachers

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have a much greater impact on the development of

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than

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actors

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and

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bosses

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, as

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from primary to tertiary level are responsible for laying the foundations of all people’s careers. Without them, businesses

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as banking would not have skilled IT

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and accountants, nor would the acting world have trained

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. The same applies to nurses and doctors, who provide an invaluable service keeping the workforce healthy and productive. Determining workers’ pay obviously depends on the budgets of the organisations that pay them, which affects other criteria,

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, their contribution to

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. It is not impossible,

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, to measure the impact of any worker on national development, especially as the work of

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and health workers are so well documented.

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, if it is clear that the government holds

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professionals

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in high regard,

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society

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will be prepared to pay them more. Another important factor in determining the pay of

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and certain health

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is that of fairness. It does not seem right if

film

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actors

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and

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bosses

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are paid many times more than others. Perhaps the answer is to legislate for fairness of remuneration to ensure that certain incomes do not become uncontrollable. In conclusion,

teachers

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, nurses and doctors are definitely more important than

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actors

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and

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bosses

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, and certain remuneration criteria are needed to ensure the former

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paid appropriately.