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In mordern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. 1. Why has this change occured? 2. Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

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Today, children are giving most of their time to
friends
 than family. In
this
 technologically competitive era, discovering to self has been more important and only possible after exposing to the outside world with
friends
. In my opinion, it is not a good idea to compel children to be homebound because it will make them passive and introverted. Being surrounded by
friends
 most of the time helps one to explore self with others and the environment. Early discovery drives a child to work on a vision.
Thus
, one can achieve success sooner in the near future.
For instance
, scion's participation in outdoor activities has drastically increased recently to identify their real strengths.
However
, controlling the child by not letting visit out with
friends
 hampers the child's development making them passive and introverted. They won't be able to explore what they can do beyond the limit. Staying at the home makes him or her dependent on family members.
On the contrary
,
such
 heir will have difficulty dealing with other people in later life which can make them feel isolated. In the conclusion, the scion is found highly with their contemporaries to find out who they really are and their strength.
Also
, they should never be forced to stay within four walls as it can make them inactive and introverted which badly affects them in later life.
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