The two line graphs show the number of births and deaths in the United Kingdom. The figures shown are from 10-year intervals starting in 1951 and going into 2051. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs show the number of births and deaths in the  United Kingdom. The figures shown are from 10-year intervals  starting in 1951 and going into 2051.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main  features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs exhibit the birth and death counts in the United
Kingdom
between 1951 and 2051. The general trend in terms of
number
of births in the United
Kingdom
is downwards. There were increases in birth figures in 1961 and 1991, but these were only temporary. By the year 2051, the
number
of births is expected to hit around 3,500,000 deliveries. Incidentally, it would be one of the lowest levels recorded in the country.
In contrast
, the
number
of deaths in the United
Kingdom
has been increasing since 1951.
According to
the graph, the death count is expected to come close to 4,500,000 by 2051.
This
count is almost two times higher than the
number
of deaths in the country in 1951. By 2051, it is expected that the
number
of deaths
would
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be significantly higher than the
number
of births in the United
Kingdom
.
This
is
opposite
Correct article usage
the opposite
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of the birth and death count status in the country
during
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in
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1951.
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