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Big salary is much important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary. Answer: It is often argued that it is more advantageous to do a job with high wage, even if it does not appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with the statement and I think that growth in job and challenging roles are more important than higher compensation.

#salary #job #satisfaction #wage #growth #roles #compensation
Dear Andrew, Hope
this
 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I’m pleased to inform you that I’ve shifted my
house
 to Calgary from Toronto. Apologies for
this
 uninformed shift, I forgot to intimate you in rush. But I would like to welcome you to visit my new
house
 Let me tell you about the reason
of
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this
 shift.
Firstly
 the
house
 which I lived
was
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 very congested to accommodate our friends. I believe you have experienced the same during your
last
 visit.
Secondly
,
owner
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 is charging a lot of money on the utilities like pool, wifi.
Even-though
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,
pool
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 is not in use he is charging without any concerns. I am irritated with his unprofessional behaviour. It made me
to
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come to a conclusion to vacate the
house
. You should
also
 know about my new
house
. It has a spectacular view
on
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 the lake and the chirping sounds of the birds around the bushes are so natural here. Perhaps,
landlord
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the landlord
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 is so friendly
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 to the old one. I am very much expecting to receive you in my new
house
. Please write me back when you can able to visit so that I will be prepared to make arrangements. Warm Wishes, Anirudha
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