You have seen an adverstisement for weekend work in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. You must apply in writing. Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing your interest. In your letter . Introduce yourself . Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job . ask what work you would be expected to do

Dear Sir, I am Grace Terry, a graduate of hotel management and customer relations from Berlin State
Univeristy
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. I currently reside in Berlin, Germany. I recently saw an advertisement in the daily newspaper for
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weekend
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in your reputable hotel
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, I would like to apply for
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role. My recent five years of robust experience in hotel management coupled with my degree in
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field will make me a suitable candidate for
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role. I am a team player, always ready to work,
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good interpersonal skills that would help me relate with the customers.
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, I am disciplined and take to corrections and I bring my best in whatever I am involved in. I would like to know what
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position entails, and the various tasks that would be required of me to do. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Grace Terry.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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