You bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. There is a problem with the item you purchased. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter explain the details of your purchase describe the problem that you have with it suggest what can be done about it

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Dear Sir/Madam, I recently bought a computer desk from your store. I am writing

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letter to let you know about quite a few problems that I have faced with the purchase. I bought

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'Damro Mahagony Wood Professional Computer table' at your store in Koramangala on 10th April 2022. The purchase order number is PRAPR10042022.

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, I was told that the order would be delivered the

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day, but the reality was, it was delivered a week later.

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, it was mentioned to me that I could do self-assembly and because of that, I did not book a technician's help with the assembly.

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, a few of the assembly parts like hinges and screws were

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missing. I suggest that in order to avoid

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poor customer experience in future, you should mention that a technician help is mandatory for the assembly and

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ensure to put in robust quality control measures to ensure that all of the mentioned parts of the desk are provisioned. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, R

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

impeccable
blemish
defective
warranty
craftsmanship
discrepancy
assembly
rectify
address the issue
customer satisfaction
return policy
imperfection
sturdy
refund
replacement
workmanship
durability
manufacturing defect
courier
logistics
rebate
customer service
resolve
after-sales support

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You bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. There is a problem with the item you purchased. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter explain the details of your purchase describe the problem that you have with it suggest what can be done about it

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some parents pressure their children to be successful in a specific field. What are the reasons for this? Is it negative or positive?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people are off the opinion that giving a good first impression at an interviewer is the key securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

It is generally observed that almost all high level jobs are done by men. Does it mean that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? Do you agree or disagree with this proposition.