You recently visited a store and did not like the customer service there. Write a letter to the store manager and say: • What was the issue there? • Why wasn't the staff helpful? • Suggest what can be done about it?

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Madam/ Dear Sir, My name is

Jinson

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Jason

, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the customer

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of your store. I visited the premise

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Friday around 7 pm.

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I have been a frequent customer and have always received satisfactory

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this

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time's story was different. I was quite amazed by the appalled behaviour of your staff. When I entered the store, none of the staff members cared to notice my presence. I roamed around randomly and nobody came forward to lend a hand.

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, I seek the support of one team member and she seemed involved in other thoughts. She did not give me full attention to me and never cared to render the

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which I requested from her.

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, in frustration, I had to step out of the store. I would like you to go through my complaint and take the necessary steps to resolve

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matter.

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, I would be delighted, if you could give proper training to your staff members on customer

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so that consumers may not face

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situations in future. I look forward to hearing from you soon and the improved

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as well. Yours faithfully, Jinson Tomy

jinmatttomThu May 12 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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200 words

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