The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts present the variety of spoken
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languages
students
at one university in London in 2000 and 2010.
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Overall
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who were able to speak another Use synonyms
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went up in 2010. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Spanish remained most Linking Words
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language
in 2000 and 2010.
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Then
the percentage of Linking Words
students
who were not able to speak another Use synonyms
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per cent
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the share of learners that speak German only or two other Linking Words
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language
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languages
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per cent
Also
, at 15%, the number of Linking Words
students
who have another Use synonyms
language
or French was equivalent.
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languages
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by 5
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for each one separately, at 35%,20% and 15% respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
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