WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#minutes #weekend #hotel #arrangements #type #rooms #cost #activities #places #interest #addresses #sir #madam

Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to make a booking for

this

coming weekend at your seaside hotel and if can provide more information about your place It would be helpful. We are planning to arrive on Saturday 9th of June in the morning around 11 am and leave on 10th of June Sunday in the evening around 7 pm. We need in total 3 rooms, each must contain a king-size bed, living room with a TV screen and Air conditioning system. We are in total 6 people.

Also

please suggest any must-go places near your hotel for adults as well as for children, it can be any concerts, bars, musical events or any parks or amusement centres for kids. Thank you in advance and looking forward to hearing from you back. Yours faithfully,

Sattor

Correct your spelling

Sattar

Submitted by kadirov.sattor755 on Mon Jul 04 2022

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Word Count

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Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

134 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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