ou bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. There is a problem with the item you purchased. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter explain the details of your purchase describe the problem that you have with it suggest what can be done about it

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Dear Store Manager, I'm writing

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letter to you in connection with the sofa I purchased from your store a week back. I purchased a wooden sofa from your store on the 7th of July.

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is a custom-made product which is of dark golden colour. I paid 127.62 CAD for the item and I have attached a copy of the receipt for your attention. The legs of the sofa are a bit shakey and the paint is peeling off on its own.

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, when we try to sit as a family it often moves against the wall which frightens us that it might break if we lean on it hard. It would be of great help if you could change the legs and tighten to screws so it does not shake when we try to use it.

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, it can be repainted so the paint does not peel off again. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Akila

kimakila98Tue Jul 05 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

160 words

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