Writing Task 1: You wish to apply for a new training programme that is sponsored by your company. Write a letter to your manager: • Explaining about the training program • Explaining why it is important to your work • Requesting him for approving your time off Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to explain about a new training program
required for our sales
team. It is a five-day course
focusing on English language communication skills. The training addresses both speaking and writing skills of the participants with an exam at the end of the course
to measure the skill level of each attendee.
In the recent past, I realized that we had lost a lot of new sales
opportunities just because of ineffective communication skills. Although
,
our Remove the comma
apply
sales
group is well educated and holds degrees from renowned universities, I feel that they are not good at making proper sales
pitch. Since it is a matter of learning, I believe providing training to the team will make a significant impact on their approach which will have direct
impact on our company's growth.
As I noted earlier, the Add an article
a direct
program
is a five-day continuous course
. Therefore
, it needs to be attended during
Change preposition
to during
the
working hours. Correct article usage
apply
However
, I had already discussed with majority
of the team members and agreed with them that the Correct article usage
the majority
course
will be conducted over the weekend and continued through the week which means we will be attending the program
for effectively 3 days during the working hours.
Also
, please be aware that the training program
needs to be sponsored by the company and I am awaiting the fee details from the training provider. Once I receive the details I will submit it
to you.
Looking forward to your kind approval.
Thank you.Correct pronoun usage
them
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,