You recently bought an item of clothing from a shop. You discovered that it had a fault and returned it to the shop for replacement or refund. However, the assistant told you that this was against the store's policy. Write a letter to the store manager

Dear Sir , I am writing
this
letter to regard the complaint that I face your
staff
. I am Neha . I visited your store
last
week in the city centre branch on 23 April. I see all your clothes and it's very amazing. I purchased a chaniyacholi, a suit as well a traditional gown. When
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pay the bill , your
staff
is not giving discounts. I have to pay payments at that time all clothes are good . After some days left, a parcel is coming to my home . When
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open the box and see the dress it was damaged. Chaniyacholi is back side damaged and gown is a different colour. I am stuck.
Next
day
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am going to your shop and tell all the damaged items your
staff
. One person his name is Suresh , he tall me that it's not a shopping field. I tell him that return my money or change
this
dress so they tell him it's not to
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our store policy. It's a very rude person.
Finally
, you would tackle
this
problem and your store
staff
tech manner that how to behave customers . I hope you would prompt action on
this
problem. Yours faithfully, Neha
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