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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men eventhough the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50%female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain % of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The diagrams below illustrate how the Islip
centre
 will change from now to the future. As is shown clearly in the graphs, it can be seen that there are 8 significant changes made to the town, and the most significant one relates to the construction of a dual carriageway. When we look at the maps in detail, the main
road
 will be replaced by a pedestrian path in the future. In the south of the main
road
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 the current map, the park will decrease in size and a new housing area will be built
next
 to it. It is worth noting that the shops across the main
road
 and the school in the south-western corner will remain unchanged in the planned development. In the north side of the town
centre
, currently, there is a strip of shops along the main
road
,
however
, these will be demolished in the plan and
instead
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 there will be new housing, a car park, a shopping
centre
 and bus station from east to west respectively.
Finally
, a round dual carriageway will be paved and encompasses the
centre
 of Islip, connecting to the main
road
 on both the east side and the west side of the
centre
,
as a result
, the countryside will no longer exist.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • workforce
  • mandatory quotas
  • tokenism
  • diversity in leadership
  • stereotypes
  • work-life balance
  • mentorship programs
  • flexible working conditions
  • maternity leave policies
  • holistic approach
  • cultural shift
  • sustainable gender equality
  • barriers to advancement
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