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A company offers a temporary job with no salary, but it helps you to gain some work experience. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, -introduce your previous work experience -tell the manager which department you want to work -describe what expectation you have from the job

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to express my interest in working with your esteemed organisation, INT Incorporation, as a part-time employee in the department of investigation. To speak of my professional experience, I have worked with a firm called IND Limited, which renders similar services as INT Corporation, as a research executive for a duration of 2 years.
In addition
 to that, I have a graduation degree in the area of accounting from the prestigious University of Delhi. Having worked with the analysis department in my previous assignment, I would like to apply for a temporary role in the research and development of your organisation because
this
 will add some quality work experience to my resume whilst I undergo an online course on data analytics. As a part-time employee, I would like to work 5 days a week because I have regular classes on weekends.
Furthermore
, I would like to hear more about the work culture of your organisation from your end. Yours faithfully, Utsav Chandel
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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