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many high level of positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than fifty percent female. compnies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

#level #positions #companies #men #workforce #countries #fifty #percent #compnies #percentage #women
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