The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided illustration compares
water
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consumption
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for three main purposes in six different areas namely: North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia.
Overall
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, it is clear from the charts that
Asian
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and
African
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countries used more
water
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for irrigation
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North American and European countries used more
water
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for their industrial needs.
To begin
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with, a major portion of
water
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consumption
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could be observed in the agricultural sector and
this
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was higher in
African
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and
Asian
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regions than that
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American and European parts. More than 80% of
water
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in Africa and Asia went into agricultural fields
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this
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percentage was only 32% in
Europe
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and 39% in North
America
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. North
America
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and
Europe
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required more
water
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in their industrial sectors than that
of
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in
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Asian
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and
African
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countries.
While
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half of the
water
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was used in the industrial sector in North
America
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and
Europe
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, the percentage of that in
African
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and
Asian
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regions ranged from 5% to 12%. Interestingly,
water
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consumption
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in North and South
America
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shows a contrasting scenario.
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, more percentages of household
water
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consumption
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could be observed in American and European continents than that
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in
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Asian
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and
African
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regions.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, consumption, america, europe, asian, african with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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