Every year, someone in the company where you work is chosen as best employee. Your manager has asked staff members to make suggestions about who should be chosen this year. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • Identify a colleague who you think should be best employee • Explain what the job of this colleague involve. • Give reasons why the colleague should be chosen as best employee.

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Sonali Dhir, I am currently working in the Marketing department of your firm. I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention towards nominating my manager for recognition and propose to offer him a reward for
this
year. His name is Sandeep Makkar
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joined our unit 6 months before and now he has become an asset to our organisation.
Although
he has recently joined our firm,
however
, the amount of knowledge he has is uncountable. Because of his support,
last
month our company was able to achieve a new international project which will benefit our company. What is more, he is a very humble personality and has always supported the team in an incredible way that I have not seen
such
dedication in any other manager we had before. I feel that he needs
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applause for his work from other staff because he has all the attributes like good leadership skills, punctuality, and confidence and always inspires his juniors.
Moreover
, his personality has a very positive influence on our team
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every month we are able to deliver effective results and each one of us wants to be like him. I hope you will think about my consideration. Yours faithfully,
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