You recently went shopping at a department store and you were disrespected by one of the employees . Write a complaint letter to the sales manager of the department store. In your letter you should Let him know about the rude behaviour of the clerk Clearly state how it happened And tell the manager about the bad behavioir

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Dear sir or madam I am Lobar Shukhratovna who ordinary I purchase all things from your department store . It means that I am

client

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of your shopping mall . I am writing

you

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to you

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in order to complain

your

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about your

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staff . Several days ago around

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apply

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5 o'clock I visited shopping at your all . So

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started to introduce

with

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apply

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prices of winter clothes because of

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chilly weather .

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I was disrespected by your clerks. Even they told me that you could not obtain it because you

had

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looked like

poor

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a poor

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person .

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I found that I was encountered

discouresty

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discourtesy

by your shopping assistants . As well as I

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going to clarify that abominable state . It means that

although

a few sellers of your General store are unmannerly ,I am sure that others are polite people .

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I have been upset by your impolite

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. So

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wish that

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department

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the department

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punished them .

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as in my opinion they should

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by you Thank you for your attention Yours faithfully Lobar

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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18Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

180 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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