Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter- Suggest how you could help in her home- home layout, done degree in interior design, garden maintenance, cooking Say why you would like to do this work-social cause, love connecting new people, new ideas Explain when you will and will not be available-weekdays busy not possible, weekends will be there 10am to 5pm

#mrs #barrett #woman #lives #town #someone #home #hours #summer #letter- #home- #layout #design #garden #maintenance #love #people #available-weekdays #weekends #pm

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Barrett, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in helping

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your home, which was advertised

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local

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newspaper on 30th June. Not only

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degree

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in interior design but

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5 years of experience. I think I can put my knowledge into good practice at your place.

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I am keen on gardening so I can do

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of outdoor spaces as well.

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I am not great at cooking, I have recently learnt various dishes through youtube so I can help

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breakfast and lunch. Despite of I am busy with my

hetrich

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Petrich

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schedule, I love to help people for

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cause

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, it gives me

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satisfaction as well as a

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of purpose in my life.

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, I love to connect

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people. As I am working in

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from Monday to Friday from 9am

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4pm. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Monica

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

interior design
layout
garden maintenance
landscaping
culinary courses
new ideas
social cause
community contribution
availability
commitment
weekdays
weekends
flexible hours
schedule

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