You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inquire about my order for the new
cheque book
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with reference number UX72618, which was requested on 13th December. The service from the bank has been sub-standard recently,
this
is not the
first
occurance
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occurrence
of my orders not being fulfilled.
Similarly
,
last
month when I applied for a debit card upgrade as well, I ended up going to the branch to collect it. As mentioned above the cheque was ordered 10 days back using the online banking portal, on completing the order, I was provided with the reference number and probable delivery day, which was
last
week and I am still waiting for the same. I understand that the bank has its processes and should be able to provide a solution quickly, I would request
you
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to
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support
on
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this
, as I need the cheque for my payment towards my rent
next
month. I shall be obliged if you could pay consideration to the aforementioned matter. Yours faithfully Keth Drake
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