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You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution. State what problems you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service. Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

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I made a reservation for a table of four in your luxury
restaurant
 on 20th December. In spite of the previous experience, I faced
the
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inappropriate
behavior
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 from your employees.
In addition
, I was dissatisfied
of
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 the meal I ordered. Upon my arrival, I did not receive a warm welcome from your
reception
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 whom I had talked
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 the reservation. It indicates the lack of interpersonal skills among your staff.
Furthermore
, I ordered a plate of fried
vegetable
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 with garlic sauce which is one of the most popular
appetizer
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 in your
restaurant
. Despite my request for bringing it before
main
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 dish, the plate came to my table very late and the vegetables were not fried well. I did not expect to receive
such
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terrible service from your
restaurant
 which has become the brand of our city.
As a result
, I would like you to take
a
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serious action
for
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 better the quality of the service which you are paid for.
First
 of all, your employees need to comprehend that they are working in a highly prominent
restaurant
 where customers expect to receive
a
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better service.
Secondly
, you need to consider the quality of cooking in your kitchen. I hope you fully understand my complaint and make
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 effort to improve the current situation. I look forward to hearing from you very soon. Yours Faithfully, Amir Safa
Submitted by amir.safa1984 on

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