Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.-How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

It is common

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worker

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workers

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such

as teachers, nurses,

doctors

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and doctors

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receive a minimum

salary

,

although

they carry out a very important

job

, with many

responsibilities

. On the other

hands

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is common as well see actors or football players earn a very high

salary

, without carrying out a

job

that is

fundamental for the development of

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society. In

this

essay, I will express my

agree

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about

this

statement and will look for some methods, on the

basis

of which, take a decision on how persons should be paid.

To begin

with, I totally agree with the affirmation that some workers are paid more

then

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the

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others,

furthermore

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this

doesn’t depend on the

responsibilities

that a worker has in their

job

, but I think that it depends on how

many

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money it can bring to a society with the visibility and audience.

This

is the reason why actors and players are paid more compared to a teacher or doctors.

For instance

, it is enough to understand comparing the

salary

of a teacher with the

salary

of Shakira. A teacher has

lot

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of

responsibilities

, as he has to teach

to

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future workers,

instead

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Shakira has a good voice and a lot of visibility, but not the responsibility to educate another person.

Nevertheless

, she brings for sure more money to a country, when she takes a concert, so she earns more. I can find another example

for

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this

issue in working as

carpenter

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a carpenter

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. He has a lot of things to take care

about

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it

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, starting from the safe of

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other people, but for sure he earns less than

a

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actor. Keeping

this

example in mind, I would like to express some conditions on the

basis

of which choose how to pay a worker. According to me,

a

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work should be waged on

that

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the

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basis

of

responsibilities

that he has and on

basis

of his and

of

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the

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other

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others

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safe, which he needs to constantly

thinking

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about during the time of

the

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work.

For example

, a bricklayer can even risk his life during his time

work

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. In conclusion, I believe that the

salary

should be revisioned and pay more who risks or has more

responsibilities

than

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those who

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has

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more fun than thoughts in

his

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their

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job

.