You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

#minutes #credit #card #bank #lists #purchases #manager #items #addresses

Dear Bank Manager, My name is Ramyen Sangheran, customer number:87652. I am writing

this

letter

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to complaint

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complaint

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complain

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about fradulant

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fradulant

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fraudulent

transactions which I found in the monthly

credit

card

statement that I received for October 2022. The bank statement consists of 5 purchases and all were made on the

Ebay

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eBay

website. I am very sure that neither did I

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nor

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my wife purchase any items from

this

website.

Furthemore

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Furthermore

, the combined total of

this

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these

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products is around $2000, which is

unusally

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unusually

high when compared to our transaction history. May I please request

for

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apply

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your

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apply

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assistance

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assist

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in solving

this

issue?

Moveover

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Moreover

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, I would like to know how an unknown person is able to use

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credit

card

details to purchase items without my permission

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I feel very confused and scared and wonder if

this

will continue. I would like to order a new

credit

card

to stop these transactions from happening again. I hope you consider my complaint seriously, as I am not ready to pay a large

credit

card

fee. Thank you very much for your help. I hope to hear from you soon. Sincerely,

Ramyen

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Ramen

Submitted by ramyensangheran12 on Tue Jan 17 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

184 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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