You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Bank Manager, My name is Ramyen Sangheran, customer number:87652. I am writing
this
letter
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to complaint
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complaint
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complain
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about fradulant
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fradulant
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fraudulent
transactions which I found in the monthly
credit
card
statement that I received for October 2022. The bank statement consists of 5 purchases and all were made on the
Ebay
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eBay
website. I am very sure that neither did I
or
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nor
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my wife purchase any items from
this
website.
Furthemore
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Furthermore
, the combined total of
this
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these
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products is around $2000, which is
unusally
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unusually
high when compared to our transaction history. May I please request
for
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apply
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your
to
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apply
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assistance
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in solving
this
issue?
Moveover
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Moreover
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, I would like to know how an unknown person is able to use
by
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my
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credit
card
details to purchase items without my permission
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I feel very confused and scared and wonder if
this
will continue. I would like to order a new
credit
card
to stop these transactions from happening again. I hope you consider my complaint seriously, as I am not ready to pay a large
credit
card
fee. Thank you very much for your help. I hope to hear from you soon. Sincerely,
Ramyen
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Ramen
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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