The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
The given pie
chats
compare the proportion of three harmful factors (Correct your spelling
charts
sodium
, fat, sugar
) that are used in four main meals (breakfast
, lunch, dinner
, snacks
) in the USA.
Overall
, dinner
and lunch are contained the most percentages of sodium
and fat, and snacks
are included more sugar
, while
breakfast
is the least harmful meal in order to containing
these three factors.
As the figures report, Change the verb
contain
sodium
and fat are the biggest parts of dinner
with 43% and 37% respectively. Lunch with 26% of fat and 29% of sodium
is the next unhealthy meal. In contrast
, just 14% of sodium
is used in snacks
as
the same level as used in Change preposition
at
breakfast
. Moreover
, these two meals are contained less fat than that
Correct determiner usage
the
in
Change preposition
apply
two
others.
Correct article usage
the two
Snacks
are the less healthier
meal Change the word
healthy
I
the light of using Correct your spelling
in
sugar
. 42% of the snack's combination
are included Fix the agreement mistake
combinations
sugar
, and dinner
with 23% of this
nutrient is in the
second place, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
breakfast
with just 16% of sugar
is the healthiest meal.Submitted by ahmadpour.irsa on
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