The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
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The given pie
chats
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charts
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compare the proportion of three harmful factors (
sodium
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, fat,
sugar
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) that are used in four main meals (
breakfast
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, lunch,
dinner
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,
snacks
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) in the USA.
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,
dinner
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and lunch are contained the most percentages of
sodium
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and fat, and
snacks
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are included more
sugar
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,
while
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breakfast
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is the least harmful meal in order to
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these three factors. As the figures report,
sodium
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and fat are the biggest parts of
dinner
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with 43% and 37% respectively. Lunch with 26% of fat and 29% of
sodium
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is the next unhealthy meal.
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, just 14% of
sodium
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is used in
snacks
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as
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the same level as used in
breakfast
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.
Moreover
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, these two meals are contained less fat than
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in
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two
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the two
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others.
Snacks
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are the less
healthier
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healthy
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meal
I
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in
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the light of using
sugar
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. 42% of the snack's
combination
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are included
sugar
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, and
dinner
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with 23% of
this
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nutrient is in
the
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second place,
whereas
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breakfast
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with just 16% of
sugar
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is the healthiest meal.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, breakfast, dinner, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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