The chart below shows the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewed genres in US cinemas in 1995,2000 and 2005 as a percentage of total earnings of the US film industry for each year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of revenue of the 7 most popular kinds of movies in the US in 3 different times which are 1995,2000, and 2005.
Overall
, the sitcom and animation steadily increased in the proportion of profits in contrast
to drama
, and action
. Another interesting point is that the ratio of adventure, comedy
, action
, and drama
often had higher than others in that period. If we look at 1995, the
Correct article usage
apply
drama
was the highest and peaked at 25%, while
comedy
was at the second rank, which had exactly 20%. The adventure and action
was nearly 15% ,however
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,however
other kind
of movies had lower than 7,5%. Regard to 2000, Change the wording
another kind
other kinds
although
the percentage of drama
strictly declined to approximately 20%, comedy
had significantly risen to 25% and became the highest rank. The action
film had minimally decreased, while
the thriller, musicals, and animation had gently went
up. As regards 2005,adventure stood out in the bar chart, which had dramatically grown up to around 25%, Wrong verb form
gone
moreover
, at that time they were the second rank. The comedy
, thriller, musicals, and animation had gently increased, but still the 3 types with the lowest profits per earnings
.Correct your spelling
earning
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