The chart below shows the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewed genres in US cinemas in 1995,2000 and 2005 as a percentage of total earnings of the US film industry for each year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of revenue of the 7 most popular kinds of movies in the US in 3 different times which are 1995,2000, and 2005.

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, the sitcom and animation steadily increased in the proportion of profits

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drama

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, and

action

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. Another interesting point is that the ratio of adventure,

comedy

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,

action

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, and

drama

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often had higher than others in that period. If we look at 1995,

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drama

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was the highest and peaked at 25%,

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comedy

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was at the second rank, which had exactly 20%. The adventure and

action

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was nearly 15% ,

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however

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other kind

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of movies had lower than 7,5%. Regard to 2000,

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the percentage of

drama

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strictly declined to approximately 20%,

comedy

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had significantly risen to 25% and became the highest rank. The

action

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film had minimally decreased,

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the thriller, musicals, and animation had gently

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up. As regards 2005,adventure stood out in the bar chart, which had dramatically grown up to around 25%,

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, at that time they were the second rank. The

comedy

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, thriller, musicals, and animation had gently increased, but still the 3 types with the lowest profits per

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.