your company does not have a staff rest area. write a letter to your manager to request an office that can be used as a staff rest area. in the letter -explain the benefits of this action -suggest an office that can be used -what should be done to transform the office into a staff rest are

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to make a suggestion regarding the establishment of a staff rest area in our

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. The employee rest area will play an important role in improving the productivity of our

company

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. If our colleagues have a comfortable place to relieve stress during working hours, their work efficiency will be greatly improved.

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this

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action demonstrates the

company

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's care for employees, making them feel valued, and leading to a more cohesive group. I noticed that there was a spare room that used to be used as a storage room and is now unoccupied. I would like to suggest that the

company

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could use it as a rest area for staff.

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, the

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may need to do a refurbishment as it is a bit shabby now.

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, some essential equipment is required,

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as coffee machines, chairs, and sofas. I look forward to receiving your response and thank you for your time. Yours sincerely, Yan Wong

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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your company does not have a staff rest area. write a letter to your manager to request an office that can be used as a staff rest area. in the letter -explain the benefits of this action -suggest an office that can be used -what should be done to transform the office into a staff rest are

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